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04 April 2007 @ 10:25 pm
Primeval Drabbles  
Here's two drabbles I wrote for a post episode 6 challenge at primeval_itv

Title: Fear
Challenge: 1A
Characters: Nick
(mentions of Claudia and Helen)
Pairings/Ships:
Nick/Claudia
Genre:
Drabble
Rating:
PG
Warnings:
None
Length/Word Count:
100
Spoilers:
End of episode 6
Disclaimer:
I don’t own them....Bugger... (although if anyone at Impossible Pictures wants to offer me a job that’d be great...)
Short Summary:
Nick is too familiar with this type of fear.

Fear. It’s the first thing that strikes him when he realises that this isn’t some stupid joke. That Claudia really is gone. It seeps sickeningly through his veins, threatening to overwhelm him, bringing up memories of feelings he’d hoped to forget.

And he had felt it before, the night when Helen didn’t come home. When he phoned her and she didn’t answer.

He panics. He can’t go through this again. But unlike before it doesn’t weaken him but makes him stronger. He’ll put this right. Whatever caused this he’ll change it.

And then he’ll tell her how he really feels.



Title:
Real
Challenge: 1A
Characters: Nick (mentions of Claudia)
Pairings/Ships:
Nick/Claudia
Genre:
Drabble
Rating:
PG
Warnings:
None
Length/Word Count:
100
Spoilers:
End of episode 6
Disclaimer:
I don’t own them....Bugger... (although if anyone at Impossible Pictures wants to offer me a job that’d be great...)
Short Summary: Nick knows her too well to believe she wasn’t real.


For a moment he wonders if he’s going mad but he quickly dismisses the idea out of hand, knowing that there is no way she’s some figment of his battered mind.

He remembers her too clearly for that.

He remembers the calming effect of her large, brown eyes.

The sweetness of the freckles dusting her cheek bones.

The softness of her voice.

The waves of long, inviting hair.

The teasing of her smiles.

Her arms around his neck.

The gentle passion in her bold lips.

He needs all of them and more. He needs her. He must get her back.
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Pixie: primeval click snog 2pixiesio on April 4th, 2007 10:46 pm (UTC)
Very nice! :D
doylefan22doylefan22 on April 6th, 2007 04:56 pm (UTC)
Cheers.

*watches icon*
Pixiepixiesio on April 6th, 2007 07:53 pm (UTC)
LOL! It is rather mesmerizing! <g>
stargatecrazystargatecrazy on April 5th, 2007 08:04 am (UTC)
Short and Sweet! lol

Poor Nick....comes back to find that his best mate had an affair with his wife and the women he's starting to fall in love with has been erased from the time line!

SGC
doylefan22doylefan22 on April 6th, 2007 04:57 pm (UTC)
No, it's not been a good few months for him really, has it?

Bless.

:D
telperion_15: What's Thattelperion_15 on April 5th, 2007 08:06 pm (UTC)
Ahhh...poor old Nick. Not the best track record when it comes to not losing women...
doylefan22doylefan22 on April 6th, 2007 04:58 pm (UTC)
No, he wants to be more careful really. That's very careless of him! :D
Purpleyin/Hans: beliefmissyvortexdv on April 6th, 2007 05:19 pm (UTC)
I really enjoyed both of them. Powerful drabbles for sure.
doylefan22doylefan22 on April 6th, 2007 06:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks for that.

Drabbles are not really my forte so glad to hear these ones work.
cb4nc4eva on June 21st, 2007 05:50 pm (UTC)
Hi, just thought i'd say that although i usually find drabbles to short to really be that effective at getting a point acros i thought these ones had a really strong sense of meaning and therefore i rly loved them :)